ILETS词汇表达

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writing

  • 确实有点像八股…每一段都得写固定的内容
  • 一般情况下,题目已经给出的关键词没有必要进行修改与替换

task1

文段结构

  • 总起(这表是说明什么用的)

    • 如果有两个表,则先写”它俩的共性作用“,再写”它俩分别代表了什么跟什么之间的关系“。
    • 如果是一个表,但同时体现了同一个量与两个不同量之间的关系,善用介词开头的修饰小句
  • 然后写最明显的特征。从这个特征开始,按照一定的顺序进行说明

    • 先说数值最大/最小的一批,最大与最小之间的差距是多少
    • 再说变化趋势(如果有的话)
    • 如果是多个变量,需要对多个变量的变化过程进行比较(或者将同一变量在不同的图中的不同情况进行比较)。把两个变量的变化联系起来的过程就是增加coherence的过程
  • 最后将图表中数值最大、最明显的特征重申一次。

    • 如果有两个表,需要分别说明两表中数值最多的项与其特征
  • 【注意,一定不要擅自增加信息!如果题目中给出信息有限,看似无法写出comparisons,那就不用写。task1与task2不同!】

常见表达

transition words
  • however
  • on the other hand
  • meanwhile
  • in contrast
  • furthermore,additionally
  • similarly,closely mirror
  • worth noting = of note
  • with regards to other figures
一般形容信息
  • pie chart->demographic information

  • 善用with与at结构来说明具体数字,善用代词来避免名词的重复!

    • with多用于说明数字,而at用于说明比例
  • 在同一句中,对于一种物质的描述应该是相同的,例:在同一句中切换使用the substance和the mineral不可取

  • 在写关于不同数据的句子的时候,不仅可以写数据本身,也可以写承载着这些数据的人。例如resident,customer,citizen等等,以他们作为主语增加句子的多样性

  • 注意:in detail是“详细地”,而in details是“一个个地”

  • 两者之间的联系:

  • the connection between A and B

对比:

  • There is a notable contrast between…
  • This is compared to xxx who…, with…
  • outperform
  • Comparison saw the overpass of the…
    • A see/witness B的句式中,B通常用于详细说明A。可以利用这个句式来对比、说明数字

分别情况:

  • breakdown

某人做了某事:

  • be responsible for…
  • the involvement in…

明显看出:

  • It is evident when looking at…
  • disproportionate high level of…
  • vary dramatically between…

多(高):

  • peak at(某一类)
  • alarmingly high

不稳定:

  • far from stable
  • fluctuate

少(低):

  • relatively low

下降:

  • fell dramatically
  • level off at…(在…时下降)
  • continue to decrease with…(不断地随着…下降)
  • shrink
  • experience a decline
  • the trend is downward

升高:

  • grow by xx times more than

达到:

  • reach
  • attain

销售额:

  • sales
  • turnover
  • business volume

生电:

  • electricity generation
  • produce electric power

能量消耗:

  • energy consumption
  • energy expenditure
chatgpt修改
  • However(比nevertheless的连接更顺畅), local fish catches experienced a decline over the following four years, dropping to(这里直接使用动名词就可以,禁止使用the number of which!) 4271.3 metric tons in 2012.
  • Between 2004 and 2008, local catches continued to rise significantly, from 2677.7 metric tons in 2004 to 8136.2 metric tons in 2008, which is more than three times the amount recorded(避免重复) in 2004.
  • Of note is the absence of same-sex marriage data in the pie chart depicting Australia’s population composition, suggesting a potential lack of inclusivity within the society regarding non-heteronormative relationships.
  • In conclusion, while both countries exhibit high rates of individuals separated but not yet divorced, Australia appears to have a higher marriage rate compared to Canada. However, the absence of data on same-sex marriage in Australia’s demographic profile may suggest a less inclusive approach to LGBTQ+ rights.

常见问题

  • Task Response: the analysis lacks depth: comparison , sufficient detail(需要具体说明)
  • Coherence and Cohesion: could be improved for clearer progression of ideas; paragraphing inconsistent
  • Lexical Resource: awkward phrasings,repetitive language
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: subject-verb agreement, tense consistency,sentence structure,tense consistency

task2

文段结构

  1. argument composition
    • para1.(第一句,注意一句就够了)说明题目所给claim的背景,(第二句)题目所给的claim的内容,(第三句)自己的claim的内容
    • para2.详细说明为什么disagreement(对立方)是合理的、在段末重申disagreement(注意:在这里不要以批判的语气去写对方的claim!
    • para3.说明为什么自己的agreement是合理的
    • para4.兼顾双方的合理性,写出solution
    • para5.总结。(第一句)重申disagreement,(第二句)重申agreement,(第三句)重申solution

常见表达

  • 善用while如果需要表达相反意见!!

  • 倒退:retrogress

  • 哑口无言:be left without argument

  • 资金流向:where the money goes

  • chatgpt修改:

    • The value of space exploration cannot be solely measured by monetary investment. While some may argue that funds could be better allocated to areas yielding quicker benefits, such as healthcare or education, the long-term value of space exploration extends beyond immediate returns.
    • While some may view space exploration as wasteful, significant discoveries such as mineral deposits or potential habitable planets could render such criticisms obsolete.
    • Reducing public transport fares represents a significant endeavor in promoting environmental consciousness.
    • With the allocated funding, public transportation can implement renewable energy sources, thereby reducing environmental impact. Additionally, the integration of advanced technologies can optimize operational efficiency, facilitating broader adoption.
    • If the cost of using public transit, such as the subway or bus, remains prohibitive, individuals may continue to favor private vehicle usage as their primary mode(注意这个词表示首选!) of transportation.
    • Both measures play pivotal roles in mitigating pollution.

开头方法

  • I would argue that…(一般这个句子后面需要接上好与不好的方面)

结尾方法

  • In conclusion…

常见问题

  • Task Response: the analysis lacks depth: addressing potential counterarguments
  • Coherence and Cohesion: there are a few instances of repetition and some sentences could be more concise
  • Lexical Resource :occasional awkward phrasings and minor lexical errors
  • Grammatical Range and Accuracy: a few instances of grammatical awkwardness and minor errors in sentence structure

speaking

开头方法

  • Speaking of xx…,I’d like to discuss something that…
  • I vividly recall the previous semester when…
  • I do know of a xx who…

重要的

  • indispensable
  • necessity
  • irreplaceable
  • integral
  • significant
  • on top of
  • xx is the thing I absolutely can’t do without.
  • Imagine my life without xx is a daunting task,…
  • Foremost in my admiration is …
  • I can’t stress enough how crucial I think xx is.

不断地

  • incessantly
  • seamlessly(无缝地)

为……带来活力

  • inject vibrancy into my daily existence

突然地

  • abruptly
  • unexpectedly

很有可能

  • it is high chance xx
  • supposedly

中断后继续做某事

  • resume

  • play on my mind
  • impetus(动力)

不断增加的

  • escalating

日常

  • In the tapestry of my daily existence,…

绝对的

  • unmistakable
  • unequivocally

一方面

  • on one facet

现在

  • concurrently

显示,表明

  • manifest
  • …open my eyes to the fact that…

很,太(形容程度)

  • plain

形容生气

  • hassle(争吵)

  • crappy

(数量)大

  • substantial

做,从事

  • engage in

迷人的

  • captivating
  • intriguing

在我看来

  • in my book

当心

  • be mindful of

广告相关词汇

  • pamphlet(小册子)
  • bulletin board(宣传板)

思路

pressure

  1. greater pressure than past
  2. work hard/ under depression
  3. share pressure with others/ release pressure/ enhance the ability to resist pressure

money

expensive/ kind of exclusive behavior—making money is difficult—cherish(won’t buy it frequently)

convenience

crazy tempo of life—time is value—transport/ technology/ order meals

health

pressure makes people unhealthy—need to do things that heals themselves—good schedule/participate in activities/self-discipline/ hygiene

independent

relationship between people becomes estranged—more likely to focus on themselves—work and live independently/ enhance the ability of independent thinking and learning

social connection(opposite to independent)

relationship between people becomes estranged—more likely to focus on themselves—join more social activities/strengthen family relationship/share our feelings and thoughts with others

  • Title: ILETS词汇表达
  • Author: morimori0401
  • Created at: 2024-03-19 16:59:27
  • Updated at: 2024-03-22 09:56:14
  • Link: https://morimori0401.github.io/2024/03/19/ILETS词汇表达树/
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